I lay there thinking why, why did I run from the police after I speed past them then I wouldn't have to be here in this pigsty, the food is appalling and to top it off I have nothing of my own and I can't see my family. I just lay there watching the time go by second by second on the smashed clock on the dark cold grafted wall, 5 years won't go fast looking at the clock the whole time but it is the only thing I can do for the 5 years but I i'll be out soon.
By Mac
Good job mac i liked your story very dark. But next time put a few more fullstops in instead of comma's
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