10/06/16 9:46
Dear Diary,
Today I am excited because I’m going to Fiji! I am actually in a yellow airplane right this moment. It’s hard to write because at the same time I'm trying to cover my ears from the screeching noise of a violin. Why would anyone bring a violin on a plane!? I'm going to try sleep now, Willow.
10/06/16 10:29
Dear Diary,
I've just eaten and we are about to land! The girl is still playing her violin. The plane just swept down! Yay we’ve landed! Tell you more later, Willow.
By Amber T
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