I imagined what it would be like to have all I could see. I imagined I had a unicorn with a long rainbow mane like a rainbow on a rainy day. I imagine I had a mansion on a hill with a water slide that slips me down to the pool. I imagined that I had a chandelier that lit up my whole house and had crystals that reflected rainbows on the wall. I imagined that I had a machine that could control the weather and make it snow. I imagined that I had a king sized bed that had a throw as fluffy as a cat on a cold winter’s day. I imagined...
By Scarlett
Hi Scarlett
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your story the bit that I really liked was, I imagined I had a unicorn with a long rainbow mane. One thing that I would want you to know is that instead of the word long you could of used lengthy or extended.
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