I imagined what it would be like to have the ability to fly, with the wind blowing through your hair or being able to teleport from place to place, but what if you could be any animal you want! You could be an elephant a dolphin or a cat. What if you could bring things back to life and let dinosaurs roam the earth like they did millions of years ago, you could watch the flowers regain their colour and trees grow new leaves.What if people could make things appear and disappear like marshmallows and chocolate and candy and everything else that has sugar in it!!!!! Because sugar is amazing and should be treated like royalty.
By Michaela
I really like how you said the wind blowing through your hair maybe next time I think that you should put more vivid verbs in your story apart from that your story was great
ReplyDeletePaige